Directed by Montgomery Tully; produced by Anthony Hinds
James Nevill (Dane Clark), president of Amalgamated Industries, is a man who takes chances in business. His latest chance, a partnership with mercurial entrepreneur Cyrus McGowan (Howard Marion Crawford), seems to fall through, and he is faced with ruin and disgrace. In order to provide for his wife, Andrea (Thea Gregory), and escape the wreck of his reputation, Nevill blackmails an old acquaintance, Paul Kirby (Paul Carpenter) into killing him. When McGowan renews their partnership, however, Nevill’s desire to live is restored - but he can’t find Kirby to break their deal.
It seems to me that I have come across similar plots - in movies or television - before, though I can’t name the sources. It may be that Paid to Kill was one of the earliest to use the plot device of a man arranging his own death, changing his mind and having difficulty cancelling his arrangements. In any case, the movie is only partially successful.
The principal villain in the movie’s failure is the script. There are a number of questions which show carelessness in the writing. For instance, when Nevill wants to call off Kirby, he instructs his secretary (Cecile Chevreau) to contact him and inform him ‘the deal is off’, without of course telling his secretary about the ‘deal’. But to give Kirby an alibi, Nevill arranged for him to appear to be in Dublin for ten days’ medical treatment. Either the secretary should believe this and not know where or how to contact Kirby or, more likely, she should not even know who Kirby is. It isn’t until later that the arrangement is revealed to her.
The alibi Nevill prepares for Kirby is itself misplaced, since the desparate businessman appears to decide on his own murder the day McGowan backs out of the partnership. Nevill’s blackmail of Kirby seems to occur that very night, yet Nevill tells Kirby that doctors, hospital stay, x-rays, etc., will be all set for the killer’s alibi. The story gives no time for Nevill to build this façade.
And why does Nevill need to provide for his wife? They live in a mansion, with servants and spacious grounds, and she refers to ‘his’ money, implying wealth. If there are other debts rendering insurance payments necessary for a survivor’s comfortable life, these are not mentioned. For that matter, if the embarrassment Nevill would suffer due to McGowan’s desertion is financial, his own funds should be enough at least to serve as collateral for a loan.
A member of the board of Nevill’s company hates him, denigrating his methods of business. What we see of Nevill’s methods are not particularly low, nor even a little unpleasant, however risky they may be. It would have been informative to know to what specifically the board member objected. As well, there is a point at which the plot shifts a little, taking attention away from Kirby, and passing it to an unknown character. This is done too early, and gives away the game a little too easily.
An accomplice in the film’s lack of success is the acting. Though Clark handles his rôle well, as do a few other actors, some are definitely not even up to B-movie standards. Gregory and Carpenter are the primary culprits. The direction is adequate, Tully - who seems exclusively to have helmed low-budget works - does what he can with the limited production values, and creates a few good scenes.
Though armed with a decent premise, which the plot twist half-way through could have assisted if handled correctly, Paid to Kill fails to surprise or excite, and doesn’t give the viewer enough credit in its presentation of the story.